Monday, June 16, 2014


Paragraph 1: In the weekends I went to sleep over Martha’s house with chloe and Ane. First my mom and sister picked us up to go KFC. Next we went to the pools to meet Chloe and Martha they were excited because they thought we were not going to come.

Paragraph 2: But there was more people like Efilona, Mele, Gianna and Lizara who came to the pools with them. Me and Ane started to eat our food that we bought then mele and that started eating our food then we started to eat with them.

Paragraph 3: After that I went to get changed so i could jump in the pool with Chloe Martha and Gianna. So after i had got changed i lined up in a straight line ready to jump in and we all jumped it was really fun.

Paragraph 4: It was freezing but i got use to it. We all started to jump on each others backs and hopping on their shoulders and pushing each other off. Then we went to the little pool because it was getting more cold.

Paragraph 5: All of us jumped in the little kids pool and it was warm as in there. I looked under the water and it was really cool because i went down to see things that were on the ground. We were all frightened because we saw this lady that was staring right outside and she looked like the grudge but with short hair. It was really fun until Efilona and Gianna left.

Paragraph 6: Only me, Chloe, Martha and Ane were left at the pools because Mele and Lizara had left to play Basketball and the other two went home. We talked about funny stuff and scarey stuff. Later on we went to get changed and we walked to Martha’s house which was just right around the corner.

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