Monday, March 4, 2013


This morning we all completed our first writing sample for 2013.I have posted it just as I wrote it in the 40 minutes that we were given ,so that throughout this year I will be able to look back and reflect on the progress I have made in my learning writing.I will post my goals from this soon.

Today at school it was really really interesting because I had seen some stuff missing. So at school I went to talk with my friends and my sister about it I said” did you know that something is different around here and they said” How? I said” It is quiet around here and people haven’t been to school lately. Me my friends and sister walked around school and we saw no one in there class. I told my friends Sapphire,Helen,Chloe and Mya to look around the other side of the school and me my sister will look on the other side so the did.

After that my friends came back Only Helen,Chloe and Mya were there and I said” Where is Sapphire Chloe said” She went to the toilet. So we all rushed to the toilet But When we got there Sapphire was gone.We all panicked we looked in all the toilets around the school but she wasn't there Chloe said” I’m scared should we all stay together Chloe was sweating all around her head.

Next Helen Said” stuff where missing  the chairs,computer,netbooks,book and EVERYTHING!  It was dark and cold I was freezing cold My teeth were chatering
I was shaking really fast so Me my sister and friends gathered up together so we could keep warm.Five minutes later I woke up and I saw that my sister ane was gone.I panicked really hard that something happened to me I felt unconscious and I fell down to the ground.

It was morning already and I Felt really really dizzy but I was very excited that i was with my friends.I told my friends to wake up I SHOUTED CHLOE, MYA ,HELEN WAKE UP!They all said” WHAT? and I said” please wake up ane has gone missing AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.All of a sudden I was on my desk saying AHHHHHHHHHHHHH and everyone was back my teacher Mrs Nua said”are you alright and I said”ummmm yes.

Later on after school I told my friends Sapphire,Helen,Chloe and Mya about it and they called me crazy.


  1. Awesome story Sarona it was funny and cool

  2. cool story Sarona it was so interesting i am so lucky to be in your interesting story.


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