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When the race was starting I felt so nervous that I was going to come last.
Waiting I also felt like I was going to fall. And I was thinking that because
last year I fell down.



Intro
We were down at the pt England reserve waiting for the 9 year old. Race to the start well waiting we saw kids running fast but most was not.

Part 1:When we all line up to get ready for the race we lift as soon ‘’Mr Burt yelled out on your Mack get seat go . All of the girls ran with speed so they can get in the front of all the PT England girls .I was going to run but I didn't because I wanted to live my breath for after.



Part 2 : The path was tacking us down to tamaki collage . It was the longest cross country we had.’’Ms squires sad ‘’ go you can do it and I said’’to my self yes I can do it so I ran then I jogged because I didn't want to lose and be at the back of every one.




Part 3: This year the race was differ and difficult.Evey where we went the path was Shelly,nallow and the path was winding,.We ran past Tamaki college when we got to the end of the Sept's it was very muddle,.

part 4:On the way to tamaki collage it was smelly because it was by the smelly Greek . It smelled like rotten banana in the rubbish bin. As we went down in the Greek it was muddy
and slippery and there was lots of buses in the Greek it looked scary cause I saw no one at the back of me so I was running as fast as I could but I lost my breath so I was jogging .