Monday, April 7, 2014

My Story

six sentence

Paragraph1: Once upon a time there was a scary boy named Hiwarau. He lived in a haunted house next to a girl named Sarona. Whenever people go pass his house he would always scare them and he sometimes make them have heart attacks.

Paragraph 2: He has a problem scaring people and making them going to the hospital every time they pass his house. He makes little girls cry whenever they are on there Bikes or Scooters. He likes to look at the end of his window when people come pass his house whenever he is tired.

Paragraph 3: In his house he has a Ghost friend named Spooky. Whenever Hiwarau is sleeping he always wakes him up and tells him to come in the Kitchen. Spooky will always try to trick him and try to Kill him.

Paragraph 4: A girl named Sarona came pass his house and scared her she got frightened and collapsed on the floor. She woke up and it was dark time. She was in Hiwarau house she was quiet when she  needed to take a step.

Paragraph 5: She went into his bedroom and tripped up on a string it played a scary song tip toe to the window. Sarona got scared and Hiwarau was next to his window she screamed Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!! she tried to get out but the door got locked.

Paragraph 6: She said” What do you want from me? he said nothing. She talked to him and said” Please stop doing this and stop scaring people. He Agreed with her and he stopped she said I’ll be you're friend if you stop this.

Paragraph 7: Later he was happy and he had lots of friend. He ditched his haunted house and he lived with his friend name Zion.

The End

1 comment:

  1. Hi Sarona,
    My name is Caitlyn Barton and I am from the University of South Alabama. I am in a class called EDM310. The story you wrote was very good! It was very scary at first. I was so glad to see a happy ending! You have a future in writing. Keep up the good work!

    I am leaving you the link to my blog in case you want to check it out!


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